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Dark Poetry #3

Distrust

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2001-11-04 01:17 PM

DISTRUST

Lies shattered on the floor
A thousand,
twinkling points of light
Reminds me of sweet before,
of dainty painted delight
And all around,
orchids and roses,
are withering and dying
With oblivious remembrance,
of thy lovely palm
Indeed a sight,
for mournful eyes
Malignant despair beckons,-
I sigh,
a heartfelt wish
But nor you, nor I,
can turn the tide
Trust,
thy name be broken

From day came night,
and darkness bred
Of fall came winter,
and solitude's ahead

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-11-05 01:57 PM

Ooooo i enjoyed this one lots!!! Trust makes the world of difference in any sort of relationship..the minute that bond is broken there goes the whole thing...great poem!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-11-07 09:56 AM

yes, this is a great read....

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-11-07 11:26 AM

"From day came night, and darkness bred..." I love that! Very well written, I love the style.

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-11-08 09:42 PM

This poem is very good. Simply excellent! I find myself reading it again

We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark.

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