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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA 
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Closed Eyes Copyright 2001 Written by James Edward Shields Burning trees by an orgy of souls Howling in a madness pure Grave upon broken earth A laughing skull peers Behind an ivory mask Drip silver and burn the gold A demon sits looking down Upon the fears of a mortal one Sleepless screams await closed eyes... We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark. Our s |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is very very dark indeed..i LOVED the imgaery which you employed within this piece james. very somber and very hellish. i loved the lines: "A laughing skull peers Behind an ivory mask" i think that those two stood out the most to me. a job very well done james. i enjoyed this very much, keep post, poet.... |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Once again, wonderful as always went well with my coffee this morning... Until..ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
The imagery rocked!! great poem!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Thank you three for your comments. I am finding time when I can to come by here to read or post. So far so good. Thanks again for your comments. We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark. |
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