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Devouring Me
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Devouring Me |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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{I apologize for posting so many lately....just can't help it I seem to be on a roll!} …and when existence takes me walking upon the black shores of insincerity I have nothing left to bare except that which you wish not hear. I have poured my soul into your desolate sea regaining nothing but cold treachery all the while begging for your mercy. Your mercy mocked me into disgrace slapping me endlessly in my weeping face. You have dripped my life into your cell spilling me over into your private hell now you drink what little is left selfishly then lick your lips as you finish devouring me. "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 "Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan [This message has been edited by alibaster (edited 10-30-2001).] |
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Poetof-the-night Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 13 |
Very good peice it reminds me of my X-Girlfriend who just about drank my soul into the ground. |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Ali... This is wonderful work... don't apologize, these are all beautiful. Keep them coming! Does the name pavlov ring a bell? |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
"walking upon the black shores of insincerity I have nothing left to bare except that which you wish not hear." do you read minds? i think you read mine,this is the perfect poem to express my day,oh what a day,but thank you for this ali. ammelid Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
One should not apologize for that such as this. It is very good and begs to be relived. |
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