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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-30 12:21 PM

On broken wings, I try to fly
with heavy heart, awash with sighs
This final time he said goodbye
and still I'm left to wonder why

My tears fall vainly round his feet
he wants to wrap it up, discrete
I'm tired of this hearts' pained beat
again his victim of deceit

How did I fail to understand
he doesn't want to be my man
just someone there at his command-
Alone, once more, it seems I stand.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 10-30-2001).]

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

1 posted 2001-10-30 12:30 PM

Sad words from such a lovely face in your picture...
Remember though, at times solitude can be ones best friend
making you realize things never thought in the end.

Until...ali {alibaster}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2001-10-30 01:33 PM

It is a struggle to mend our broken wings,
but it is more disheartening to think
we may never fly that high again.

I hope someday you will.

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

3 posted 2001-10-30 01:46 PM

I applaud this piece, and feel your pain. Brighter days are ahead. (I know)

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-10-30 02:21 PM

I'm tired of this heart's pained beat... sad... yet provocative. I hope you are not contemplating what that implies, for it would be such a tragedy... sometimes, sorrow strikes us when we least expect it.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-11-02 11:52 AM

This was sad but powerful...you expressed your emotions nicely....good job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-02 12:24 PM

Such sadness.... You tranlate it well. Solitude indeed can heal, but so can the warmth of another. But as hard as we might try to feel better, such scars do not heal completely, but a person can cover the scar and move on to another moonlight.

We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

7 posted 2001-11-07 02:49 PM

a great poem my friend yet also sad. well i'm back i know it's been a long time and i have alot of catching up to do but I am here for you now and always my dear sweet friend.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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