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Immortal Beloved
Junior Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 42
the carpathians

0 posted 2001-10-29 05:39 PM

In the legions of words
there is no conversation.
All these people,
and i feel desertion-
crawl across my skin.

In the vast quiet
there is only noise.
All this chaos,
and i feel a kind of peace-
numb,cold,but comfortable.

Where do the words collect?
The words that have no home,
where do they gather?
Like me,do they resist-
the silence?

Where does silence go to relax?
Does quiet crave chaos?
Soes silence come to Earth-
on vacations?
We all want most what we rarest get.

Death is the conglomerate,
of words,silence,noise,
and speechlessness.
i could never want for more,
after all we crave most what we seldom get.

Isn't that true? we crave love,
and substitute it with lust,
but still,no love.
Most of all we crave peace,
and find it only in sleep.

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

1 posted 2001-10-29 05:50 PM

How true how true how true...
we only find peace when we sleep...
{No wonder I am absolutally out of my mind and write of such twisted things...lol...
insomnia brings no peace!}

Thanks for a grand read...
Until...ali {alibaster}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-10-30 11:52 AM

I find my peace in sleep, true, yet I also find peace in solitude, and nature when I'm alone. Nevertheless, I thouroghly enjoyed this work. Thank you for this!

Immortal Beloved
Junior Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 42
the carpathians

3 posted 2001-11-02 01:23 AM

thank you both for you're kindness,you are truely gallant...lol

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-11-02 03:50 AM

this one made me think quite a bit, i mean we couldnt have quiet without having noise right?...very good piece IB....keep writing!

"......",said the wise mute.

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-11-02 05:04 AM

Very interesting and strangely true. I commend you on this wonderful piece.

We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2001-11-02 10:21 AM

Lots of thought provoking lines in this poem. One of which is We crave most what we seldom get. Our sense of what is entertainment has changed alot since 9-11. as Hollywood is finding to be true. Enjoyed this poem and will be looking for more of your poems.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-11-02 11:34 AM

Nicely done....Good job here

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Immortal Beloved
Junior Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 42
the carpathians

8 posted 2001-11-03 07:00 PM

whoa!! i'm surprised (pleasantly of course

) at all your kind replies.
songbird- they say that during times of war the movies that sell best are cheery movies and that horror films thrive only in peaceful times....something i find strangely interesting...anyways,thanks for your comments

lida

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

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