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alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-10-28 01:54 PM

Some thing old,
some thing new,
some tattered and torn,
from me to you.
Take what once was hidden,
once forbidden,
once black pitch ridden.
Hold gentle upon your hands.
a soul in weeping need,
watch it bleed,
and let it be freed.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-28 07:36 PM

This is painfully sad..... I so enjoy reading your poetry, your soul running free... Wonderful.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2001-10-28 09:45 PM

Liked the way you did this...liked the begging to be freed ending to it. So much truth in that we are sometimes trapped by the very things from which we need to get away...

jwesley

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-10-28 10:38 PM

Hello, Mistress of Dark Poetry.

You do your talent well. I love this.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

4 posted 2001-10-29 04:35 PM

Thank you kindly and am happy that you enjoyed.

Temptress...you give me far too much credit dear.

Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

5 posted 2001-11-01 09:55 PM

Wow this is great, so vivid!

LOVE ELMO

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

6 posted 2001-11-01 10:31 PM

Good job. This is perfect for this forum. Definitely dark passion.

JT

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-11-02 12:13 PM

Dark and beautiful.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

8 posted 2001-11-02 03:43 AM

very nicely done ali- i loved the distinct rhythm within this piece- it gave it a very nice flow. beautiful words once again. keep them comming, poet...

"......",said the wise mute.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-11-02 11:49 AM

Dark....nicely done...simply wonderful

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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