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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
The moments that we shared lasting through the hours loves fleeting journey like dying petals on flowers. ~*~ Yesterday a passing memory a love that lost its bloom has left an empty space inside this lonely room. ~*~ There is a love that's true you will know it in your heart where the journey never ends.. and emptiness shall depart. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
very well written marie  ..i enjoyed it very much- gave me a sense of hope...keep writing.
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Cherish, Thank you for reading and I am glad that I could give you a sense of hope. Everyone needs hope! smiles ~Marie~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
pretty my friend. jwesley |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
jwesley, thank you for reading and commenting. smiles ~Marie~ happiness is contentment of the heart [This message has been edited by sunshinemist (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This has made my day! Hoping love is really out there for me 2  LOVE ELMO |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
Real nice. I like the way the sadness turns to hope. JT |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Elmo, thank you for reading. Love is out there for everyone. You will find it! ~hugs~ Marie ---------------- Jt, thank you for the read and your nice comment. I enjoy writing about hope through any trial in life. Keep the faith. ~hugs~ Marie smiles ~Marie~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very nice poem...sweet ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
xSugar, thank you very much for reading and your lovely comment. smiles ~Marie~ |
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