Dark Poetry #3 |
Darkness Bound |
alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Darkness Bound Liquid emotion runs free as darkness makes love to her black soul tenderly. No lines between pleasure and pain when fear has nothing left to gain. She holds no colors of life, nothing fades from black to white. Images of foolish dreams left behind as she wanders from room to room in her mind. Embracing the only comfort found, walking in darkness bound. "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 "Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan [This message has been edited by alibaster (edited 10-13-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A dark write indeed. I have felt this many a time myself (I'm sure many of us have) You express the feelings very well. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I have read this 3 or 4 times already, and I LOVE it! Very nice to see you here, Affy, my friend! *Jenn* Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Thank you both for the nice words, glad that you enjoyed. Temptress....Welllllll....HHeeeelooooo Nurse!! Been some time hasn't it? I moved to a new house and been busy with that and re-vamping {lol with a wink} my site!! Have missed you my dear friend! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful. This poem is full of passion, and the symbolism enhances the images seen... A very good read. |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
lovely choice of words here,i love your descriptions and smooth writing...i especially liked "No lines between pleasure and pain when fear has nothing left to gain." very interesting.... ammelid Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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