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Dark Poetry #3

Viewing a World with Hate

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-10-13 12:48 PM

VIEWING A WORLD WITH HATE.

Viewing a world with hate
filled with dust ridden fate
Tripping on a war infested tongue
killing the innocence of our young
Dancing in a sea of blasphemy
humming tunes of fear tenderly
While death waits in the shadows patiently
to rock the tattered souls gently.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

1 posted 2001-10-14 12:38 PM

Very well said. It's not an easy time to be a part of.

JT

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-14 12:59 PM

These words express so well, the emotions many of us are feeling. It is very well written, for a truly tragic circumstance

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-10-27 01:36 PM

I truly enjoy reading your poetry, ali. They always manage to brighten my day.... Even dark ones such as this.... Well written.

Immortal Beloved
Junior Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 42
the carpathians

4 posted 2001-10-27 08:53 PM

excellent work,puts me in mind not in style or in word choice,but in subject of a poem by blake? i think...something about "when sin claps it's broad wings over the battlefeild,and sails rejoicing in the flood of death; when souls are torn to everlasting fire,and fiends of hell rejoice upon the slain." that's all i remember,because it's my favorite part,lol,reeeel helpful i know,ah well....so anyways,i love the way you've treated the subject,i love the meaning this peice has,good work!!

lida

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

Poetof-the-night
Junior Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 13

5 posted 2001-10-28 02:21 PM

Nice poem alibaster, it had a nice rythm to it.

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