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Passionate Friend
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Passionate Friend |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
PASSIONATE FRIEND: From an impossible night A never-again stance Came an overpowering light And a knowing glance Once before I saw it there The same feelings known Yet, that time, not shared A one-way, cold stone But you knew me And you felt me Shared my pain Felt it again Held me tight Made it alright You and I In a dream to last Lifting us up Together, the past Is nothing and none For by your side My life has begun Hope's revived THEN... In the darkness of hell Painful words spoke To bid farewell From the dream awoke To never again Be where I belong Passionate friend You're forever gone. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... sad - written well. ~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes indeed, very sadly written. Very well expressions here though AND never give up hope!  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"To bid farewell . . . You're forever gone" What can you do about this, except write the poem . . . Thanks for sharing. |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
They tell you not to give up hope, but I tell you what, sometimes it's GOOD to take an intermission. Good work here, and I look forward to reading more. Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Enjoyed reading this very much |
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