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Dark Poetry #3

The One Thing

sash
Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 125

0 posted 2001-01-23 12:35 PM

Playing on the one thing
that used to drive You mad..

Memories of a sweet embrace
when things were not so bad..

Lying here awake
while You sleep soundly by My side..

Wondering who the woman was
You'd chosen for Your bride.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-01-23 02:07 AM

time, twisted like a rope
can still hold hope
holding up the one thing
memories can ring

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

2 posted 2001-01-23 01:36 PM

My, my. You certainly hit a shocking note with so few words. Well done.

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie

ThyWizard
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 56
Chambersburg, PA, USA

3 posted 2001-01-23 05:48 PM

Short and sweet, sharp words.
well done

" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown

Tryps

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

4 posted 2001-01-23 08:18 PM

hard words to write...but sometimes so true

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2001-01-24 04:12 AM

Wow! This is great

I bet you've touched many chords with this. Take care.

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2001-01-25 06:45 PM

sash,
Wow! time changes everything sometimes beyond recognition. great write.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

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