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After Forever |
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silent whispers Junior Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 40Alaska |
Its over begings will always continue wrapping limbs a weeping tree over burdened by guilt crystal eyes starring into the crackeling black blazing thoughts knowledge blooms in this heat remembered feelings true loves never really dies Its over this was the begining folded hands thunder clapping across vacent stares solar collapses exploding embraces vibrant as autmn leaves dripping tears melting words that were spoken long ago silent music reverberating through every speck of dust Inside the light you lose its edges until pushed |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I enjoyed reading this, it conjured up some interesting images for me. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the images in this are indeed well done. . . I like the form of this too. . . it makes you think. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Nicely done....one poem within another. Very unique, and your imagery is vivid. I saw every scene in my mind. And I lie here in bed all alone- I can't mend |
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