Dark Poetry #3 |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Empty lines Empty lines on a piece of paper A pen full of ink A heart full of pain Can place a mind in a kink Mixed up messages Sent by mistake Can kill a dream It’s more than I can take Lost and no where to be found Walking in the pouring rain alone Not caring what happens now For you are alone and I am gone It won’t matter in the morning For I won’t be walking on this ground I have nothing to stay around for When morning breaks I won’t be found You have made it plain for me to read You have written it upon the wall No more pen to paper shall I do I will find myself a hole in which to fall It hasn’t been a good day The night just went to heck I wish now, well I won’t say I am just tired of my heart picking up the check © icyheart 09/21/01 |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the heart always pays too much. . . sad thoughts here my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I agree totally Sven...thanks for reading it alan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Great piece Alan. Some great lines there: A pen full of ink a heart full of pain I'm just tired of my heart picking up the check Bad night huh? But good poetry ![]() If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow--I hope better dayz are coming for you--Great piece here-- ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
more like a bad 3 months. thanks for reading it....since I posted this I added an extra stanza.. thank you Tracey thank you qtpieelmo |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan, this is just so sad..... I'm wishing you a happy heart....(((hugs))) |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
SEA...don't worry those pretty eyes of yours too much alan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
So how does the extra stanza go? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I am just tired of my heart picking up the check" That is quite a line. I sure hope there is still a balance left in that account, because there will no doubt be another heart for you to 'spend' time with, and maybe your balance will double next time. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Tracey..since you asked... My life is empty of you A brand new view I shall live alone pretty soon I shall just be gone Midnitesun...I am not sure I want another check...think I'll pack my heart in ice.. ![]() |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I like that line A brand new view (Possibly a better view over the horizon) Pretty soon I shall just be gone Well, her loss. Just so long as you won't be gone from passions. Always enjoy listening to your pen ![]() ![]() If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
thank you Tracey....i like the way you think.. alan |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Sad... Good write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope you clean up the mess and find a new account...James |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Some great lines here.. but don't be so hard on yourself.. a better love will come along and until it does..enjoy those West Virginia mountains.. wish I were there. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Zinsser...thank you for reading and replying. JM...i closed the account..put the mess in the trash..just waiting on the man to pick it up... Songbird....thanks for the advice...i'll do just that... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A sad story you tell tonight, Alan. One can only hope that it gets better soon. Dee |
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