Love Has Been Known To Fall Apart In the Lobby of Her Heart

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Love Has Been Known To Fall Apart In the Lobby of Her Heart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-09-21 09:07 AM

Love Has Been Known To Fall Apart
In the Lobby of Her Heart

Once I was lost
in a moment of emptiness
but as they say I'm only
in control of mine own heart.
Still I understand not the feelings
that keep us apart.
Because I want to give it all
and you on the other hand
possess not a notion to call.
So I'll take my place
in the lobby of her heart
wanting a mutual love to grow
while watching it fall apart.

JamesLee
September20,2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 09-21-2001).]

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-09-21 11:44 PM

*sigh* I understand this, and I enjoyed it very much. Wonderfully done.

*Jenn*

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-22 07:11 AM

JM.are we truly the only ones that can control our hearts. This is a good read and i know this pain..good luck
alan

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-22 11:08 AM

I've never been good at waiting. . .

well done my friend. . .

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-09-22 04:03 PM

Thank you Jenn, Alan and Sven for reading and responding.
Alan I think I meant that I can only control my heart and other then that I must wait in the lobby for her heart to soften...
Sven I am terrible at waiting...as I watch love fall apart...I feel sadness and then anger...does she think she is too good for me...and so on...and go on...James

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-23 09:13 PM

I love those last two lines.

Wanting a mutual love to grow
While watching it fall apart

And the reference to the lobby of her heart

Great choice of words. Well put.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 09-23-2001).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-10-13 05:09 AM

Thank you Tracey I appreciate your response...James

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