Dark Poetry #3 |
Can't Stop |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I can't stop crying I can't stop the tears I see my soul is dying But I can't stop all the fears I can't stop the pain And I don't know what to do It's driving me insane Because I can't stop loving you I can't stop the memories I can't stop the past I can't stop the simple fact For him your love will last I can't stop the agony That tears my heart in two My yearning is a burning And I can't stop loving you G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
this is so sad. it does tear you apart when the one you love loves someone else. good luck in your life. great read alan |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Very well expressed! Tears help the heart heal, so let them flow. Mags |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
I'm in the same place you describe here so well. How do we accept that the place we once held in someone's heart now belongs to another? Very powerful piece you have written. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I'm so so sorry your haveing to go through this... Beautiful longing in your write.. ~Connie~ |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Hope you can't stop writing. Nice read. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
it's very hard when the tears keep falling, but it's the only way, to heal the heart. very good poem. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I'm not going to comment on the thoughts behind this one other than to thank you all. I'm sorry to hear that some can relate. I wish you the best. Thanks again. Oh, and allis4angel, don't worry, I won't. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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