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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2001-08-29 07:00 PM

Everytime she accomplished anything,
Everytime she 'shined',
Someone else would be there to steal her glory,
Take her credit and call it 'mine'.

Those others not knowing the meaning of unconditional love,
Only feeling anger, hatred and jealousy,
Not wanting or understanding challenges,
They barely existed - don't you see?

She seemed to have the midas touch almost,
Everything she did, she did well,
She loved the challenges and accomplishments,
When involved that way she need not cower or dwell.

She was a diamond in a barrel of coal,
A shooting star meant for better things,
The others always there to dampen and doubt,
To take away the high such accomplishment brings.

No longer will she doubt herself,
And what she is capable of,
It's so obvious what she has become,
A person people admire and love.

Those that don't understand,
Those that only carry shadows,
Now are understood and looked on with pity,
As they wonder where such magic goes.

She will 'shine' on,
Her light and love there for all to see,
No more shall she smother her magic,
That brilliant diamond a gift for all the world to see.

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-29 07:57 PM

like the song says my friend. . ."Shine on you Crazy Diamond"!!

and don't ever stop. . .great job with this one. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2001-08-29 09:33 PM

Thanks Sven

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

3 posted 2001-08-30 04:43 AM

I know I have been quite impersonal my dear friend, but I only again see things without end. Please look for some feelings. I am so sorry.

remember when you were young etc... It's always been time for you and your loves to shine like the sun..

Please ISIS, be aware and know that you are loved by the one that it truly matters to, not to mention the myriad of souls here.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-08-30 08:30 AM

I like this Isis...the title drew me in, the author receives the Applause! Well done!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-08-30 02:17 PM

You go girl

Well expressed, Isis - may you always shine in everything you do.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2001-08-31 12:53 PM

Thankyou my friends

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-08-31 07:13 PM

This was wonderfully written and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue

Suetang

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

8 posted 2001-09-01 09:56 AM

I really like this--Great expressions

LOVE ELMO

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