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Dark Poetry #3

waiting

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-08-21 10:08 PM

for hours I have searched the streets
waiting for the second hand to meet
the 6 and then I'll see a change
nothing can remain the same
forever

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-08-21 11:15 PM

Interesting. It creates for me the feeling of waiting for change (of course) and sort of welcoming it. enjoyed.

Welcome to Passions, and welcome to the Dark forum. Feel free to look all around you. There is some wonderful stuff here at Passions.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2001-08-22 01:14 AM

Welcome to Passions!!
Very nice work here.
Short, sweet and to the point!
Makes me think what I
Am waiting for!!

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2001-08-22 09:25 AM

I like this--U can't wait for something to happen, u have to make it happen yourself--Welcome to DP

I'll be looking for more by u LOVE ELMO

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2001-08-22 12:07 PM

thank you. i'll be looking around here and checking things out. looks really nice so far.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-08-22 06:24 PM

I love the way this reads... inspires varied interpretations.

~Tier

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