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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-21 03:43 PM


Twisted Mind

Thanks for kicking me in the teeth when I was down.
No apology necessary for I had a dental appointment anyway.
I find your method of notification to be profound.
Alright I get the message you don't want my hopes and dreams around.
Not much doubt left in my head so now I will accept the fact that this relationship is dead.
Sometimes it's necessary to adjust one's way of thinking and this must be one of those times.
Sometimes we lead ourselves to believe someone cares for us  until a good kick in the teeth straightens out our twisted mind

Jameslee@August21,2001
NoOneActuallyKickedMeIn
TheTeeth...JustEmotional
Frustration.

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-21 05:21 PM


frustration indeeed... have felt that way myself a few times more than I care to remember...

well expressed James

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-08-31 03:34 AM


Thank you Cpat for your nice response...James
BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
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3 posted 2002-10-11 05:42 PM


I have felt this way too many times.....sometimes an emotional kick in the teeth hurts more than a physical one....

This deserves another go 'round...

good write...


Amaranthine
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since 2002-10-06
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ON Canada
4 posted 2002-10-12 03:07 AM


teeth are a good source
of awakening pain, if 'only' in a physical sense...

still, it is true, the pain profound is bound within the barrow mound of broken dreams and aching hurt which only those we love assert

(cheesy rhyme aside, broken heart or no betides, I sympathize to hurted mind and heart aside.) -GASP-

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