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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Sitting there Unaware in a puddle of puZzled parts she rambles through unmatched edges contemplating the outcome Unwary with eyes blurry, staring there Across stormed streets still steaming Black market washes corners making completion impossible, Trying to steal her mind focused, on picking up the pieces moistened by the rain, pain now swirls toward the drain, she notices nothing. Gloom |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow....how deep.....i liked it.  death is certain, life is not |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Thought provoking work and interesting presentation, Prof Gloom. I liked it. Maeve |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Spine Grinder & maeve I am glad you enjoyed Gloom |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i really liked this...i got a very vivid image from this...very nice Gloom. ~Dawn |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
Very nice. I'm definitely going to read more of your posts. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Pout Princess, I am pleased that I cold give you An Image with my words that you might enjoy. Thank you very much, Carolina, I am honored that your first post Is a response to my poem, my humble writings. Gloom |
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