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Dark Poetry #3

Only time will tell, and it Will

samt
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 52
Brisbane

0 posted 2001-08-06 04:40 AM

So many mistakes, I have foolishly made
but every word poeple say,
that if I use my mind, my heart and my love
I can do anything
but then they say give up
who am I to belive I ask
I will belive my heart

Thy heart speaks to me, with an Angel's voice
it says I can do anything
if you belive
belive in yourself
so that is what I shall do
a quest I shall undertake
to show my beloved who I am
the man she really loves
the man she said I Love You to
the man I will be

When she sees my true self
she will not want to go
to leave my side she will not want
and need my love she will
for I am going on a journey my friend
a journey to find my soul
and when we see my soul so true
is when she and I will sail the great blue sea
when we reach the destination
is when we will be complete
and will happon my friend
Meg an Sam will be.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-10 10:01 PM

Your love and pain are very apparent my friend. I hope that healing begins for you soon.

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

2 posted 2001-08-11 07:27 AM

Wow, that was a good write. Great job.
LadyPeach1

samt
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 52
Brisbane

3 posted 2001-08-15 08:02 PM

serenity, thankyou for your understanding, I just hope she sees the me which I have truely shown. Thanks again

LadyPeach1, thanks, I am glad you liked it.

Sam

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2001-08-19 05:56 PM

I REALLY understand your pain, I am going thru rejection right now (If I missunderstood the poem, slap me) and can truely sympathize. Sadly, however, things don't always work that way, the girl I love saw me, and it did nothing to make her love me.... Well, enough with my ramblings, heres what I think, any poem from the heart tends to be good, and BOY is this good. Hope to see more on a happier topic (U know what I mean)! Hope it all works out 4 U!

-Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

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