Keep looking on... (inspired by Mr. Webb)

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Dark Poetry #3

Keep looking on... (inspired by Mr. Webb)

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2001-08-02 12:28 PM

If I look over at you
In the distance in between
Grab your hand and hold it
Would that help you see
That love is always waiting
For you to just grab ahold
Keeping you warm and satisfied
When the nights seem so cold
Helping the darkness fade
And the sun come into view
Drying up all the tears you cry
In the daily things you do
Keep an eye on the sky at night
Watch the stars above
Maybe even make a wish
That you will find true love
I know the path looks lonely
And the nights seem so long
But never give up
Just keep looking on ........

(I just hate when someone gives up on finding love! )

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!
[This message has been edited by Dark Kisses (edited 08-02-2001).]

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2001-08-03 10:58 PM

I liked this one--u may lose lots of love but there's always more to give

a simple smile can brighten someone's day!!!Great work LOVE ELMO <3

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-08-05 03:22 AM

Thanks for the positive message here!

If you give up on love, how will you ever find it *ponders if that made sense* lol. Overall this poem had a precise beat to it and flowed well. Wonderful piece!!

~Jess

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2001-08-17 10:30 PM

Thanx for the advice. I have many times almost given up, but someone/something always interferes. That was this poem this time.

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

4 posted 2001-08-18 01:26 AM

WOW! What can I say, I'm speechless. Thank you so much Mags. That definitely put a smile on my face.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

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