Dark Poetry #3 |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Use me and just let me go let me float away let me be the filthy one don't think twice about it it's over and done use me and just leave that's all you want anyway just another way out another way in another way to lose use me and let me leave i don't want to be yours i don't want to be your satisfaction if there's no love behind your deeds i don't want to be the one you leave bruised and broken on the side of the road bruised, broken, used. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Very good read here. Full of raw emotions and truthful feelings. I liked! |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
HURRY!!! "Float away" from the person who makes you feel so desolate and used. Very simple, VERY powerful... I am VERY impressed. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Alyssa ~ Yet another beautiful and powerful poem from you. I loved it... know this myself. But I still let myself become trapped in his web... *stuffs it in her library* Very well writen. What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
this is da shkit.../Drew/ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
In some ways he does this to me, in some ways I do this to myself. He's never used me, though my friends say he does, he doesn't. He's just missinformed. He thinks that I'm always gonna be around, and I'm not. I'm not gonna turn down other guys b/c of him. I haven't dated anyone in a year. That's a year too long. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I understand u completely--my friends only remember me crying over my keith--but they cant remember how happy he made me (even though it was there) always the bad--Great job expressing your feelings-- LOVE ELMO <3 |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Beautiful, just beautiful. Thanks for the read. |
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