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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

0 posted 2001-07-31 10:21 AM

She came about by nothing more than gin
And a lavish grin that sat upon her face
While the walls sighed and the moon lightly cried,
And the crows crooned the night away.

Walking in synch with this maidens tap,
A silken wrap lay draped on her shoulder.
For the sun lay hidden beneath hills forbidden,
Giving the shadow free roam of the day.

This maiden's tear did drench the floor,
Where before did time relay her disgrace
Shattered and torn left feeling forlorn,
The crystal paints pictured her dismay.

Three years back the world smiled pure,
Where feelings obscure were better felt colder
For when she slept dreaming of freedom she wept,
And yearned to be led astray.

Onto a path of rocky foot holes,
Where all the souls caught with deaths embrace,
Wrapped their hands into times white sands,
And in order, they knelt down to obey.

And in the darkness the shadows did dance,
Catching a glance from the trees so much older.
For as she died through her lonely su'cide,
The shadows just drifted away.

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

1 posted 2001-07-31 11:26 AM

hey this is good shkit..i felt every word, every emotion..good write../Drew/

Jessica

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-07-31 01:08 PM

Three years back the world smiled pure,
Where feelings obscure were better felt colder
For when she slept dreaming of freedom she wept,
And yearned to be led astray.

My favorite stanza ^. I know this all too well. Your words were very deep in this piece.Wonderful write, Lizzy!!

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-31 11:52 PM

wow..ej...this was VERY well written...your expression is amazingly dark...the emaning behind is sad...hope all is well.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

4 posted 2002-11-01 11:51 PM

just stalkin ya on the smart search.

i am officially green with envy.

how do you do it girl?

can you teach me?

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

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