Dark Poetry #3 |
Alone with the Moon |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alone with the Moon Yes of course I wanted to make love to you. And I surely would have if you wanted me to. I didn't realize our relationship would end so fast. It was my hope that I could find a love that would last. Surely you know that I would never use you. It was not my intention to so quickly lose you. So now I know the fate of one that falls in love too soon as I spend my evenings in agony all alone with the moon. Jameslee@July29,2001 |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Wonderful James ~ Exellent decription of a lost love here... I've been there... Just keep your head up and know that there IS some special someone out there just for you. What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Poignant...but there will be nights when the memories get you through. As a moon "devotee", I particularly enjoyed this glance into your thoughts. I particulary like the symbolism of the moon...she waxes and wanes and reigns in glory again...just like us! |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Oh wow! I could just feel the sadness in this poem! A job very well done here! Mags |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
hey this is da alkflk.../Drew/ good write.. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
enjoyed reading, James... ~Tier |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
just perfect James |
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