Dark Poetry #3 |
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Alone with the Moon |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alone with the Moon Yes of course I wanted to make love to you. And I surely would have if you wanted me to. I didn't realize our relationship would end so fast. It was my hope that I could find a love that would last. Surely you know that I would never use you. It was not my intention to so quickly lose you. So now I know the fate of one that falls in love too soon as I spend my evenings in agony all alone with the moon. Jameslee@July29,2001 |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Wonderful James ~ Exellent decription of a lost love here... I've been there... Just keep your head up and know that there IS some special someone out there just for you. ![]() What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Poignant...but there will be nights when the memories get you through. As a moon "devotee", I particularly enjoyed this glance into your thoughts. I particulary like the symbolism of the moon...she waxes and wanes and reigns in glory again...just like us! ![]() |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Oh wow! I could just feel the sadness in this poem! ![]() ![]() Mags |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
hey this is da alkflk.../Drew/ good write.. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
enjoyed reading, James... ~Tier |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
just perfect James |
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