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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
here not now how happen how how here not now it came out of nowhere and i say it somewhere i did here not now seeing in going out slow like a cow here not now wow just wow wounder splender here not now just saying it with me words here not now i write poems all the time and i post them for all of you. some times i write 4or 5 a day and then sometimes just one and i post the one that i like |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
good poem...sorry it went unread for so long. i liked the repetition..keep posting *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
An interesting piece LKP. The repetition was a good effect. ~AF~ "To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!" Homer Simpson |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it. I thought it was different. Quite nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very intersting CLP I'm a little lost though So, a little explanation of the poems about will help thanks "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Interesting to say the least.  You did a wonderful job. Gotta love poetry that makes me tilt my head.  Hope to see more. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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