Teen Poetry #4 |
I Am Who I Am |
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
*I Am Who I Am* Why is it that I never know what I want and when I finally do I'm always just a day late you're gone with a piece of me with you Some people say I'm stubborn but they don't know how I feel I think what I want and I am who I am you can't change me so deal You spend all your time trying to turn me into you When I can't just change I can only feel the way I know how to I'm sensitive and I worry I analyze and I smile to much I need to be held, yet sometimes I cringe by your touch I can't explain how I am but if you cant except me Then so sorry for you It obviously wasn't meant to be ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well geesh I guess you are going through some problems.......Acire's long time rival is really getting to you!! I know acire will be there for you, and so will us, the people of PIP. Hope you get better. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, this piece kind of contradicts your other. In this one, you seem a bit more proud and esteemed than you do in the other. These poems compliment one another nicely... you obviously are feeling quite a bit. Keep your head high, Kiley. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I think it's important to the message that these two poems are read together, so I'll try to keep this where the other is. Beautiful poem, I might add! Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
""" I am... Who I am What you think, I don't give a damn """ Red Hot Chilli Peppers I couldn't help but think of that song after reading your title. I always liked those lyrics for what they are saying, and that stands true for this poem too. I think you expressed a good attitude here. Jason [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopey Dopey Dopey ~*shakes head*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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