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FallNTears Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 20 |
What people see me as is a total lie, I am only what I am when no one is watching But I dont even know that person So how do I really exist? |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Outstanding... outside of a format or any kind of length, this poem truly did get to me. I know the feeling all too well of putting up a false front to please people, and then being confused later by it. If we are who we are only on the outside, how are we to know who we truly are? Perhaps this "front" that one creates is truly his/her actual nature? His/her true "self?" You are bound to raise a few questions with this poem, FallNTears. And that is a good thing. Thanks for the very interesting post, and welcome to Passions in Poetry. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
uhm allan, shutup. Welcome to passions, it was a very clever first post  Just kiddin Allan  JR When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done, I liked this. Ignore allan, AND jer.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! if you go to Teen explorer you might like to know a bit more....it's a place to get critiqued better and such......oh yea and there's cake.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions If Dopey's gonna tell you there's cake, I'm gonna have to ask you to ignore him But seriously, who am I to tell you that? Well, who am I? Hmmmmmm.......great poem! Post some more ........Please "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions FallNTears! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us. I really enjoyed your first post. Wonderful ponderings ... I love to question life. Well done, I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Nice to see you've decided to join our family here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you do enjoy reading and sharing. As to you first post, it indeed is intruiging short but a big question on life look slike you'll fit in just right keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS Great poem to start everything off here. Thanks for the awesome read. Keep em coming. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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