Teen Poetry #4 |
What My Heart Says When Im With You |
branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
What my heart says when im with you. My heart says "Wow, can this be true?" My heart says "Your the one!" My heart says "I think I can start to unbend" My heart says "You'll never leave" My heart says "Could I be wrong?" My heart says "Im having second thoughts" My heart says "Five months...WOW!" My heart says "Doubts I should have never had" My heart says "Finally I can open up" My heart says "I LOVE YOU"!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwwww such a sweet poem branden. Ok now i'm going to have to hurt you! haha.....where on earth have you been pal?!?! We've been missing you here. Oh and the snowball......you betta watch yoself brotha!!! Nice seeing ya back, and now you stay FOREVER!!!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yup, ditto what Dopes said. Cept the snowball part. I dont wanna be violent...hehe FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!! and not a day less. ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha... this was very cute. I love the tone of your poetry, Branden. Can't wait to see more. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww you're poems are always so sweet..great job *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That is SOOO sweet. Dang.... Bel |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
hey guys im sorry ive been busy with school and everything and i have plenty of poems for you guys hey dope i am back FOREVER!!! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
nice to see you back you've been gone for a while what a way to come back too seems like you've swept the girls of their feet "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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