Teen Poetry #4 |
Forgetting |
Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
Forgetting I swallow my pain Pop it like pills How does it help? The emptiness it fills Broken hearts & promises With nothing to spare I loved you so much but you were never there. I will overcome it I will learn to smile I'll learn to forget you Just give me a while You'll learn one day To treat people right All I can do is pray & Hope that you might. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* There's nothing I want more to take than the only thing that they won't let me take... my life. ~Bel |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hi you dont know me but hey this poem is great. You know to be heart broken is bad really bad if you check my poems out in the old forums you'll know ive gone through a lot. Well hey this poem was great I love your sense of direction with this ~Branden~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is a good poem. The sheme is very simple, and the message good. Best of luck with the situation. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great raven! I thought that it was written just wonderfully. Beautiful poem here.......nicely done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
great poem just like the rest keep it up *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow..i really liked this one!! great job and keep em comin! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
love to see new members with awesome poetry! this was no exception, great job bro! "I swallow my pain Pop it like pills How does it help? The emptiness it fills" JR When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself... |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a very nice poem, I loved it...very well written. Keep it up Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Beautiful poem, Raven! Very simple, but meaningful... NICELY done *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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