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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
"Mandi" An angel on earth has just had rebirth do not damn god for taking her away her pain and suffering have ended today you may no believe in heaven or going to a better place even though she was an angel among the human race her body was used and her soul abused but she found her way out i regret deth was that route pray for her even though she is dead prey that her memory lives on in your own head she was not know before birth but she had her time on the earth she found her wau out of a painful maze I know for myself she'll be rememberd always Since I never really knew her I hope no one is offended by this. But as someone said..."ask not for who the bell tolls, it tolls for thee" basically saying she was a human being, thats all I need to know to be sadened by her death. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice tribute to mandi.......keep it up  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Poet, That was beautiful i am sure she heard it. That was very thoughtful to her as well as me. Thank you Poet for the tribute it is only a man with a willing as well as good heart that could have done what you just did. Thank you once again you could see it was from the soul . |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That was beautiful... A wonderful tribute to someone sooo special... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
is this for real? i just read her poem in the other forum im so mad and so confused can you confirm this? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Acrie, Sadly yes this is for real. If you are confused then please e-mail me and i will glaidly try to explain it all to you. Sincerely Amanda |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well acire somebody called angel in flight and told her that mandi was gone. im not sure what this means either but theres pretty little to interpret. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Poet ~ I am so lost for words right now. She will be remember. < !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
She will always be remembered. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow... poet you are a good man... nice job.. Lets pray for her. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think this oem should stay on top so all can read it cause it's a beautiful tribute for Mandi so, BUMP I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think this poem should stay on top so all can read it cause it's a beautiful tribute for Mandi so, BUMP I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I haven't replied until now, but I would like to clarify that it is not because I neglected to read the poem, but because I knew nothing about Mandi, and don't want to disgrace her memory with some false reply. I feel sorry for anyone that knew her, and suffered her loss, and indeed her as well, considering she was young at the time of her death. I don't want to undermine anyone's genuine feelings toward this situation, so I've nothing to say. I just thought that i would clarify that, so please do not misunderstand me. -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I'm sure she would appreciate all of you... >¶Øʆ< |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is an excellent poem for Mandi, I guess my late reply will move this to the top for a little longer. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey me too, Lake. This situation is terrible. But at least she's no longer suffering. Nothing any of us say can change any of this, but we can remember her. Nice tribute, poet. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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orange()alligator Junior Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 21 |
poet, wow that one is really sad (like most of your work) c'mon when r we gonna see a HAPPY one from you? lol u can't always be that sad and depressed...hopefully. i hope mandi rests in peace. she will be remembered. your friend, orange()alligator |
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