Teen Poetry #4 |
Afraid Of Love |
HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
...again, i've never been in this position... just words outta my head... I put my heart out on the line Just to have it broken in half Each time I see your face Whether in person or when I’m asleep My broken heart continues to bleed I tried so hard to tell you But the time wasn’t right Then I tell you and my world turns from day to night I woke up too late Just to see you move on But I’m still waking up to find you at the crack of dawn I’m sorry if I was scared before But I’m ready now If you’ve lifted yourself from my black cloud Please tell me That you can still feel me Each time we lock eyes Because if you don’t, It’ll be easier for me to let go If I move away from my memories Of a love I once had But lost "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
haha nice critique message But neways..this poem is soo me..im so afraid of love now its not even funny. but someone will come along and make you not afraid anymore *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well afraid of love.......I'm not afraid of it....more like afraid of not having it....or......being left.....ya know? Love is not scarry for me, it's the fact that I might lose it that is. nice poem I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think Dopey is actually Mr. Valentino I agree with him though i think I'm afraid of loving someone but actually, when i look deeper in me, I'm more afraid of not being loved "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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