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HiddenSparklez
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British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-02-28 11:05 PM


...again, i've never been in this position... just words outta my head...

I put my heart out on the line
Just to have it broken in half

Each time I see your face
Whether in person or when I’m asleep
My broken heart continues to bleed

I tried so hard to tell you
But the time wasn’t right
Then I tell you and my world turns from day to night

I woke up too late
Just to see you move on
But I’m still waking up to find you at the crack of dawn

I’m sorry if I was scared before
But I’m ready now
If you’ve lifted yourself from my black cloud

Please tell me
That you can still feel me
Each time we lock eyes
Because if you don’t,
It’ll be easier for me to let go
If I move away from my memories
Of a love I once had
But lost



"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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DancinQueen
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1 posted 2001-03-01 12:18 PM


haha nice critique message But neways..this poem is soo me..im so afraid of love now its not even funny. but someone will come along and make you not afraid anymore

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-03-01 02:22 PM


Well afraid of love.......I'm not afraid of it....more like afraid of not having it....or......being left.....ya know?
Love is not scarry for me, it's the fact that I might lose it that is.

nice poem



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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3 posted 2001-03-01 05:33 PM


i think Dopey is actually Mr. Valentino
I agree with him though
i think I'm afraid of loving someone
but actually, when i look deeper in me,
I'm more afraid of not being loved

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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