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When you look at me
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When you look at me |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
When you look at me When you look at me I always see The reason I love you so you and me, we're always on the go I want nothing but to be with you my friends say this will come soon but soon is never fast enough being without you is tough so i guess i'll wait for you to come around but until then my hear will be weighing another pound from all the love i have for you inside but when that day comes, its you whom i'll be beside |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey, this was a very sweet poem.. you have what i need to learn.. You can wait!! hehe just kidding!! This was great!!! Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job of expressing youself in this poem!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker [b]Please visit my webpage: [URL]http://lakewa |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here.......Sweet poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww this was really cute. good job *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That is really very sweet. hope someone could give me assurance like that too "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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