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My Mistake |
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MysticalAngel7 Junior Member
since 2001-02-24
Posts 20 |
I had the most Amazing guy But sadly now I sit here & cry Human temptations Ruined my life And now all I see Is depression and strife My life is over My world's gone bad I made a mistake I lost all I had Oh God if he knew How much it I regret I am so sorry Losing you is what I get I'm sorry it happened I wish it wasn't true I seriously believe I was falling for you If I lose you forever I won't know what to do I am so sorry That I hurt you I swear it won't happen again Please believe me, It's true I want a relationship That lasts forever with you Neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,can ever dissever my soul from the soul, of the beautiful Annabel Lee -E.A.Poe |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is so sad... to lose someone, then truly realize what you've had... I defintly have felt like that before.... nice work expressing your emotions. jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
it was the famous someone who once said "you never appreciate what you had until you don't have it anymore" or something like that. you get the point anyway... LOL it's sad that you have to lose someone to understand just how much they mean to you. You expressed how much you 'loved' this person and lost them very good in this poem. great job ~Valerie~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad piece. We all make mistakes, but all we can do is learn from them and move on. I hope that you are able to work things out with this person. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I've never been in your situation. If you cheated then that's horrible and you paid the consequences.....c'est la vie.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Your poem expressed your feelings well, good job on it. Please visit my webpage: http://lakewalker.homestead.com/index.html |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I cheated on this guy i was dating this summer and my cousin's bridal shower....(shakes head) and the consequences really suck. but remeber every action has a reaction and it sux to learn it the hard way. great poem by the way. Regina |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you did something wrong and you have to take what comes with it seems like you do regret what you have done though show the person this poem communication and the truth works good together you know "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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MysticalAngel7 Junior Member
since 2001-02-24
Posts 20 |
Thank you for your replies. Yes... it was sorta a cheating thing. I was only dating this guy.. and I kissed another guy last weekend. That guy told some people about it and so happens one of those ppl were my guys best friend. He told me that if I didn't tell him... then he was. So, I told him Monday... and as of now... we are completely split up. It's the worst thing that has ever happened to me. I lost almost the perfect guy over my stupity. But, I guess that is life. He said that we can still be friends... and I am thankful for that much. So, I am doing alittle better. But thank you for your concern. Always...Carissa Neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,can ever dissever my soul from the soul, of the beautiful Annabel Lee -E.A.Poe |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's nice to see that things are getting better for you  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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