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Insanity’s Requiem
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Insanity’s Requiem |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
I know I told you the end to my horrid posting had arrived, but I found a moment at the end of my labwork today to get online. So, alas, here is some more yucky work, my apologies included. Vreni Insanity’s Requiem Deafened aroma solely lingers, Bitter rage the trigger fingers. Quandary’s trap the sun has set, For the moon she’s never met. Bestowed a line to save a soul, In return, proportioned whole. Purple talons puncture deep, In your thoughts, slink and creep. Credulous face lays unfound, Idealic loathing comes unwound. Iron-tinge taste of newly bled, As your death you surely wed. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
wow that was great, I don't see why yuo find distaste in your work so severly. It's really good. Even though I had to get help from my dictionary once or twice (shhhh I'm not all that bright when it comes to language) anyways you really should post more I think they're wonderful. >¶Øʆ< |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Wow... that was trully amazing. Heh... I really like this poem (not to mention liking the title). It just feels so very deep... "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one vreni. I liked this one a lot. Do explain a bit though.....you know how stupid I am.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is good, but I don't think i'm grasping the real meaning. Help!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
your words overwhelm me.. I too need some explanation. We are not as wise as you ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ok Vreni for some reason, I can't find a dictionary right now  Your vocabulary is too wide for me I do agree with the others Please give me an explanation I'd love that  thanks I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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