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I never knew until the end
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
(I made this poem...and...it truly does not explain anything at all that has happened and even the person I wrote this about wont understand it,but...oh well.. i guess) I never knew until the end.... That the beginning never begun. I never comprehend what I had ... until the lies unraveled and the web disintegrate and no longer spun. I never knew I tortured you.... I had ferociously killed your vitality and you had drowned. I never perceived.... life could be so bitter.. when you promenaded out the door... and were no longer around. I never realized what I had done... How enveloped in corruption were you and I. I did not know the mesh we were spinning.... Until ...it unraveled in front of my eye. I did not desire to witness the truth!! That you were in hell.... meanwhile I..... in infinite paradise. And though....I weep on this day... for the anguish that I gave myself .... Praise to you, Benevolent Sir, for being oh so wise.... As to give me an item I could exclusively dream to receive. I thank you,....... ...................... For giving life to me. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great poem. It's nice to see what you came up with, after all of this. You're welcome.  [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
"I never knew until the end.... That the beginning never begun." This was awesome! Great job. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
amanda, this was a beautiful poem. It so full of emotion. Regina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a very nice poem. I thought that you wrote this quite well. I presume it's about Allan..... once again, I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem was written well, I like some of the strong words you use. You did a really good job on this one! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well written poem Amanda. You truly have an amazing talent. keep it up So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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