Teen Poetry #4 |
Kelly's love poem |
litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
it has been 6 months since me and my love were forced to stop going out. i wrote her this love poem to show her that i'm still in love with her. and after she read the poem she said that she still loves me i jusess that this is what i have been looking for. well i hope you like it. i try to understand exactly what is love what is this feeling represented by a dove i see the crazy things people like to do look at this thinking Matt that is not you to go and give my life to one and why only one that is something i can’t do to see the face of one person and to be with them all the time love is do crazy it makes some people rhyme but seeing you right now i under stand why people do i know this because i’m in love with you i love you with the world i live to see you face i will just go and die if i don’t get your embrace i run all the way all the way to you not having you is something i will not do so i give this poem this poem for you the only thing i think is will you love me to? to share this with me to go on day to day know this love in every shape in every way somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hey cool! I think this might be called metaphysical poetry, similar to John Donne's poems like "A Valediction Forbidding Mourning!" Anyhow, I loved the theme quite a bit. You did a good job here. I am glad that she still loves you. Your rhyming here is quite good. I think that your feelings are well conveyed by this poem. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really sweet I'm sorry things aren't working out as much as you would like, but thru all, you both are still there hanging strong. thanks for sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
mind asking how u were forced to breakup? well this was one of the loveliest poems ive ever read JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite lovely indeed. I'm glad she liked it! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
A really good poem you've written here, your feelings are told so well. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Awww how sweet!! I really liked this, i wish the one i love would write sumthing like this to me... or I could do it to him hehe it was awsome and I'm really gald she liked it!! She should of it was grate!! Good job! Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I thought this was very good. Im happy she liked it. Regina |
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