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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Saddness is in my body I look around my room see picture's then someone makes me even sadder but does he care? I can't take life anymore people make me so sad they no longer care they blame everything on me. Everyday I go deeper in life because of him, I don't know why I dated him when I knew the pain afterwards. I ignore him he still instant messages me, I get sad when he talks to me he doesn't care. Sometimes I wonder how did I fall in love with him? there's no answer I just want to die. My heart is broken he rubs in how much he loves his girlfriend I ignore that he says "hello". Finally when I crawl into bed all my fears are gone all my saddness is gone until the next day. Min |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a good poem, sorry to hear about this guy, but one day you will look back at this and know that it was for the best. Good luck Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww babe you should never let anyone every make you feel this way. keep your chin up and think positive  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a very good poem. We all have times that we feel depressed like this, when life seems to test our strength even more than usual. When we get through them and look back, we realize the importance of these tests of strength. If you feel as if you don't want to live any longer, though, it's time to get help. If you want info or just want to talk, feel free to contact me.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here but don't be sad......we all love you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey Minna, I think it's time for you to change all your usernames so he can't IM you anymore. Unfortunately, some people are so childish to do such things to others. Hope you start feeling better soon. So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ski*Chick, being strong is something that not everyone has the capacity to do. I hope for your sake you find that strength to prevail. This guy sounds like he needs a good solid beating. He'll grow up one day or fade into the background along with the rest of the deadbeats. As for waking up in the morning, keep your chin up. It does get better but the only one who can say when is time. If you get sad do what Acire said and change your usernames. You don't need to feel like crap because of some punk ass guy. I feel for you though. I hope that things do get better soon. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I am sorry to hear of the problems. I can totally relate. I have an ex who still calls(almost every night), she likes to brag how great life is and how much she loves her bf, and I am still stewing over her. It hurts, but you just have to fight through it. If you need someone to talk to feel freee to email me. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
seems like a tough situation keep on trying to pull through very nice poem JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Dave got into trouble for writing a email, my sister emailed me and wasn't to happy with him. So he's on my block list, cause I'm not changing my screen name too much of a pain. My birthday is Feb-25 I'll be 18yrs old! Bye peace.   Minna You can hide, You can be crul, You can't be my friend. |
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