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Why Does It Hurt So Much
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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-=Why Does It Hurt So Much=- Why is it that everytime I hear your name it makes me cry? Makes my heart break over and over again How am I supposed to love someone again When the pieces just won't mend Why is it that everytime I see you it makes me breakdown? My knees go weak, the ground nears as I melt Entering a void of our extensive past Regretting everything I've ever felt Why is it that everytime I hear your voice it makes me weak? Makes me curse myself for not staying strong Putting the pieces together one more time I just need to know what went wrong Can anyone tell me why it hurts so much? **just a lil somethin i shouldnt have posted ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you did care that's why  if you didn't, it wouldn't hurt So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, my guess, is that it hurts because you took the risk. I'm not saying don't take that risk. "To be always secure is to not truly live" I hope you feel better soon. I wish you happiness and love. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
You hurt so much because your feelings were true. Yes you took a risk as elvenblood said but risks are good. You learn a lot after getting hurt. Sometimes you think, just don't take the risk but it's always better if you do. It makes you grow stronger. Hope you feel better though... It's never nice to hurt so much, I know!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Because like everyone else says, it was real. Don't let this keep you from loving someone else, though. I've seen that mistake made countless times. "That's the thing about love and romance - no one can predict where it will take you. Love will fill your heart, break your heart, and then heal the heart that's broken"- Robert Fulghum It's hard, I know. Really hard. But think about it this way: You WILL survive this, and when the next guy comes along, you'll be that much more experienced with your emotions, and will be able to love him even more than you would have been able to if this hadn't happened. As the famous quote goes, "It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" Hang in there girl, we're all rooting for you  "I am Canadian" - Joe "When I find the right guy for me, I'll love him no matter what he does or what he's like" |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
DancinQueen: I've never really experienced this type of thing before. However, I think that you should try to get to know this person more. I like your quote, BTW. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I think it my drowsy state of medication. That love is all beauty but thhen it can get flushed down the toilet and thats when it sux. but we gotta love or else life would suck, right? amazing feeling to your poem!yes u should have posted this!! Regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
I haven't been in your position either, but I do know, life does go on. And just writing about it, helps a lot.. hope when you wrote this it helped a little. Good emotion throughout the poem tho.  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey, great poem. I can relate to this quite well. Keep your head up, everything will be okay. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
oh.. of course you should post it. I think it's very good.. I wish I had an answer for ya but... yeah, you guessed... I don't. I think acirE spoke wisely though. Hope every thing turns out good in the end... I'm sure it will ~Jason To steal ideas from one person is plagiarism; to steal from many is research The early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Anytime we put our heart at risk..we take a chance..and many times our hearts end up being broken. Powerful emotions Great poem. ~Nikki~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well acire is right........you care....and when something bad happens or something bad that somebody you cared about does....it hurts.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey, that's a first, Dopey agrees w/ me  So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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