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Crash&Burn
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since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

0 posted 2001-02-16 12:16 PM

I hope you all enjoy I made these 2 some time ago, not showed em to many people. Tell me what you think
My true companion
I sit here in boredoms abyss
with my cheery companion Piss.
What hopes for tomorrow?
What dreams will be achieved?
I wonder, I look, then wonder some more
All I have in my endless question
my only strand of something other than this
is the one the only, still cheery, Piss.
Turning to the darkness,
darker still,
no end to all this ponder,
no end to this sad road.
Yett all my hope are not at bliss,
because as always, still is sitting, always cheery my lil dog Piss.
Now here's the second one I hope you like

Life?
Once amid in wonder;
I can't help but ponder;
I ask, no answer, I ask again
What is this life I live?
Now do not let the wise fool you;
For this question could forever trouble your mind;
Being such a tiny trifle;
Still I ask you;
My reader;
Why waste your life in ponder?
When all you can do is wonder.
May this answer satisfy your hunger;
Live your life, for you only get 1 chance.
I hope you like and I await your thoughts

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-02-16 02:28 PM

Hey jorge......well I liked the first one. I thought it was pretty cool hehe. The second one was nice too.
Nice to see you posting here pal....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

2 posted 2001-02-16 02:58 PM

well umm thanx allwho read or at least skimmed I hope you enjoyed

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2001-02-16 03:09 PM

At first I was like, "What the..." and then it all clicked. I'm really slow sometimes. Oke, maybe often. lol

Spifforific poem.

and in the end
we still pretend
the time we spend
not knowing when
we're finally free
and you could be
-NIN "The Wretched"

Angel of Darkness

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-02-17 12:03 PM

Good job on these!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-02-17 02:57 PM

You named your puppy piss?? That's sad...

However... these were very good... nice job!

xoxo
Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

6 posted 2001-08-08 04:33 PM

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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