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My Best Friend
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My Best Friend |
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Kaze New Member
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2 |
You were my best friend, Until that fateful night. We said it'd never happen, but it felt so right. We said whatever happens, We're together til the end. So what went wrong? Now we're barely even friends. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem said a lot to me, I think it's great  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
if you feel this much about your friend try to talk to him/her seems like to you, based on you poem, he/she is really worth being a friend communication is important So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
VERY nice expression of feelings here. You did well with such short amounts of words. Well done on this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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