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I never meant to hurt you
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I never meant to hurt you |
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zorkon65 Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 27 |
I never meant to hurt you by charlie herring Never meant to lie For you I would surrender all For you my life would be forfieted Hurt and love go hand in hand A thin divide, a chasm so wide I try to walk it but I fall in Painfully I land at the bottom Where I have to start all over again Hate hurt and anger all surround me Then you came along They ran away, scared off by your song But somehow I hurt you Somehow I messed up Said I didn’t love you But it was a lie, because for you I would die, offer this life I lead For you I would swim the deepest sea Go to space, to the farthest galaxy I don’t know what you want Nor what you need if I knew that, Then you never would have cried Because of me, never been in pain Because of me, never been hurt by me I need your forgiveness cause I need your love I need your forgiveness cause I want your love Of all the dumb things I have done Losing you was number one Let me know how I can get you back Let me know what to do For I cant stand losing you I am a fool, for saying what I said But please give me one more chance work like you don't need the money, dance like no one's watching, and love like you've never been hurt |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad poem, but I know from personal experience that Valentine's day doesn't hold magic for everyone. You portray your feelings well. Thanks for posting, and I hope things work out for you.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
so sad. it's good to sencerely apologize though. It takes a heart to do so. grea poem So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Very sad.... I think you are a sincere & loving person, who could express your TRUE feelings in your writing...I consider that a gift...Though I hope you will heal. Continue writing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad poem here.......it sucks that this has happened to you and your former partner. I surely hope things get better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was good! sad, but good. i guess i just like poems like this. they say things in a way that nothing else could. well... i like the flow and description. and i love the ending about dumb things. i've done a lot of them too LOL ~VALERIE~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job of letting your emotions flow out in this one  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker [b] http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Wow.. awesome poem.. very sad, but a very good read. Wonderful expression. Keep posting. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
We never MEAN to hurt people. Unfortunatly, stuff still happens...  Nice job on this. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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