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Rhythmic Red (Haiku and a CHALLENGE)
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Rhythmic Red (Haiku and a CHALLENGE) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Write a haiku poem about this graphic... and post it as the subject: 'Jeremy's Haiku Challenge - "Title"' As for the format, its 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllabes..NO RHYME!   'Rythmic Red' Rhythmic spout of red Vines along towards it’s growth Like blood from within "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This challenge I must take! I already wrote my response, but I don't don't care much for it. Nice job on your haiku though!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Nice job JD, but I don't write whatever it is (I can't spell it so I won't try) anyways, good job with this!~ Allysa I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Naw... i don't think so... I'm not too good at Haiku. ~Maybe~ though... ~_^ When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great challenge JD, can't wait to see who takes on it So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey maybe I'll try it. I really liked your haiku, jer. Vewy pwetty...vewy pwetty indeedy. ~Carly "Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done. Nice challenge, but I doubt i'll be a part of it......I'm not much of a taker on those. They scare me.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Hey that was good. Nice job. I love Haikus. |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
Jeremy, hey it janette! i havent been in here in a long time! how are you? im doing great! i hope you had a great valentines day!! maybe you had a honey to spend it with.. ;O) hehehe,.... that was good thinking on your part about this poem thing..... i like the idea!! but is that your pic? it nice!! i will talk to you on aol some time soon i hope! love always, janette Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like the poem, and the image. I will give it a shot. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Jeremy, this is great! I loved the graphic too. May we publish this in the Digital Passions newsletter? Just reply here or send me an email. Thanks. |
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