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Teen Poetry #4

I thought I loved you

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-02-11 09:14 PM

I thought I loved you

I thought I was in love when I saw your face
You set my heart to another pace
I thought the "love" we shared was so real
I thought for sure it was the real deal
There was never a moment when we were apart
You had definatley stolen my heart
But after a while we grew on each other
And we decided we should move on to another
I thought that the immense pain would never go away
My days were now cloudy and grey
But now I'm so very glad that we decided to part
Because now I am more wise and smart
I realized that our love was just lust
And our going out wasn't really a must
But I'm stronger now
I know to go on and this is how

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2001-02-11 09:47 PM

Aww..good poem...glad u overcame this

kepp it up and smile

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-12 05:27 PM

I'm glad to see your strength with regards to you situation. Good for you. beautiful write

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-12 07:58 PM

Very nice job on this one.......it's sad that what you thought was love was only lust. Good luck in the future.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-02-12 09:01 PM

good story... very well said... thanks for the read

Jeremy

"Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'

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