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Candle In The Night
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Candle In The Night |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Candle in the night don’t desist guiding me now dispense the light some way somehow. The darkness is abounding with tears of anguish and remorse. Assist me to descry my way, help me behold my course. Candle in the night luster like you one time did however please this time..... shine from within. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
whoa, great work, this is very well writen and very discriptive too. keep writing and more importantly keep posting. >¶Øʆ< |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Telling your guiding force to change its light source is risky. Good luck with this. Beautiful poem as always, Angel in Flight. -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Poet, thank you for your kind words Allan, I know that asking to change its light source is very risky, but in all truth there is nothing left for me to lose. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow, I liked this poem TONS. very very very good poem. The whole thing made complete sense. Shine from within......very good ending......very good. I think this is my Fav. from you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Thanks Dopey i am happy you liked it so much.  |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
As did I like it. I believe this is in my library now in case of some inspirational words. Great ending also! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That was GREAT... what more can I say... keep it up... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
I think that the candle that you've mentioned is like destiny. There is no one that can say what our destiny is going to be or how we'll get there, but we'll get there somehow. And how we'll find it is up to us because no two paths are the same. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I am just one big fan of your writing Every poem i read of yours brings in this feeling of satisfaction in me....I love all of em I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on this poem!!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Great poem. Very meaningful!!! Keep 'em coming. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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