Teen Poetry #4 |
Your smile |
Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Your Sends so many emotions Melts my heart Illuminates your face Lets me see who you are Extends out to everyone |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
short but full of meaning I've always like people who smiled It gives out all these good feelings to others that some people just take for granted awesome poem...i love it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice acronym. The smile is a powerful tool. I haven't done an acrostic poem in awhile. Perhaps I should dust off my old skills and delve for awhile? Just one more weekend activity. ~_^ Good job. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Behold the power of a smile... you've captured it very well. I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice job on this one....... I liked it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Smiles are wonderful "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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