Teen Poetry #4 |
Self Image ( this is the best poem I have ever writen) |
Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
My life is not worth living I can't take it anymore The constant stares of the blind People, people who only see me For what I wear I am not suicidal Just sick of the titles People only looking at my Appearance not knowing me Well it's all over now All done with we are through My life is not over not by far It is just beginning a new And the first words I say to you *cough* you --Neo Note: I am not sure if I can put anything on that last line after I say to you but it was a four letter word and the behind it was you so I am not sure if I can even put this but oh well hope you guys and girls enjoy it. [This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Wow.. awesome poem! I understand completely what you're saying. I'm sick of the titles too. But you know you can always talk to me right? I hope you know that. I'll talk to you later. And great writing... *Jennifer |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Yeah I agree, its a shame that people judge others by their appearance and not their true self. We all get so caught up in material things that we'd rather be seen with someone thats goodlooking and rich rather then someone who has the best personality ever. Oh has society changed, keep your chin up tho and smile because you're YOU *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow! way to put it: "I am not suicidal Just sick of the titles" nice job, keep it up! JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Thanx for the replyies and I hope I don't get in too much trouble for this peom but anyway your replies are greatly appreciated. Oh and Jenn I am so mad you did not eat lunch with me heheh cya soon/write soon --Neo |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great poem, Neokrew! Personally I'm not sure if it's the best one you've ever written, I've read pieces by you that I enjoyed even more. Nonetheless, a great piece here. *cough* you... that sums it up nicely. ~_^ -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
cough you? what's that? haha nice poem though. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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