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Casting A Shadow
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Casting A Shadow |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Prenote: There isnt one. Enjoy. ‘Casting A Shadow’ The raven sky doesn’t reveal, It’s procedural candle grin; Thou shall cast no shadow, Of yesterday’s mortal sin; I clench the head of the issue, Beating it a’gone; Remembering it not for long, Thou shall pass on; Expunge this mood of Lucifer, That leaves me so stark; Thou shall cast no shadow, For it is much too dark. JeremY RaulinaitiS "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
wow.. that is an amazing poem. You are such a talented writer, and I admire your poems. Keep it up! *Jennifer |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow..wow..wow..  i like ...Ooo and this was my 500th post!! woohoo ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
getting better and better everyday congrats Kiles I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Thanks everyone...congrats DQ! JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
*digs out Webster's Dictionary and asks for a translation from Shakespeare-like writing to blonde-language* this is great! it'd be better if i could understand it. *L* ~Valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
What a wonderful thought to end it with. I loved this one, Jeremy. Great job. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Jeremy, I liked the way this poem was written, as usual the flow and everything was wonderful. I really like this one. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yo there, this was magnificent!! Carly liked it lots and lots and lots. Keep that pencil\pen\keyboard\crayon movin.~Carly "Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NICELY done jer! This one was very good. I liked it a lot. One of your good ones.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
I enjoyed this poem very much. Keep writing!  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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