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Hardkore Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33San DIego, California |
Ruthlessly encased in a lair of ignorance Blissful to others, a private hell for me For I have seen the truth behind the lies we weave Deceptions innocently spawn from the search for happiness This search infused with power breeds treacherous hybrids Hybrids capable of doing anything to obtain what they strive to achieve Entrapped by these hybrids, till the day I show the world what I know Hoping that I won’t have to destroy these walls of ignorance alone Passion fuels my love Passion becomes consumed by my love Without my love I become passionless |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I totally feel this. I don't know if I misinterpreted what you meant by it, however, I felt you were talking about being blind to things surrounding you in your world. Suddenly you realize all of it. It's happened to me so often, now it's just ritual.  Nice work.xoxo Jenn |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's all just growing up. Adolescence, the age when our questions are answered. At least, this was my take on it. Hybrids would be... at least it seems to me... the people who hold you back, because they are also searching for answers? Just my amateur interperetation. Very interesting piece, great vocabulary. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have a great grasp with words a huge vocabulary and a a beautiful style of writing thanks for the read keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice one pal. I liked this. Not my kind of style, but it was still good. I've seen better from you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It was expressed very well, great poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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