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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2001-02-08 12:18 PM

Walking a life with a heart full of pain,
Clouded thoughts with no chance of change,
With every life I truly help fix,
Yet standing alone in this darkend alley with the hurt and broken heart feeling to mix,

Trying to have a better life,
I justify myself between what is good and what is right,
Simple picture of life waiting in my hand,
But truth hurts and where would I fit in,

Standing upon another brink of madness,
Just one more more glance to uturly sadness,
Walking behind life's doors,
Just wanting nothing but to be ignored,

For it would suit this life I lead so dear,
But only to give up and cry out of fear,

Endless chants,
Endless lies,
Day is breaking,
I am saying goodbye,

All in one,
One in all,
Not a want,
Just time for the fall,

Pictures Ideling inside my head,
Pictures of happiness are not this living dead,
I pray the day that I can cry,
Bu until I must abid you goodbye.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

1 posted 2001-02-08 12:24 PM

*Crying* for personal reasons. Great poem you have made, and shared with us today. Keep writting and posting This is truly might be the best poem i have ever read in my life. It was a wonderful read.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-02-08 09:20 AM

*patting Amanda on the back for personal reasons*

Yes, indeed this poem was truly excellent. It also reminded me of something very important happening in my own life.
Kind of enhanced the message.
Well done.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-02-08 04:17 PM

you've expressed you sadness real well. I'm just hoping that you'd get better. hang in there.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-02-08 11:57 PM

NIcely done here jytree!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

5 posted 2001-02-09 11:11 PM

thanks I am glad because I thought that this is a good one thanks for the support,

Been living in hell to long,
look in my eyes to see the truth,
About rock&rolling and raising the roof

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

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