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What I can't say to you.
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What I can't say to you. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Have you ever realised, that if we were to die tomorrow, and everybody knew, that the phone lines would all be busy, with everyone wanting to tell someone, I love you? Have you ever realised, who the person I would call, would be? Did you ever think it was you? Because I'd want to call you, but would you call me? There are so many things, I can't say to you, I can't remember them all. There are so many things, I've already said to you, that made no difference at all. There are so many things, for me to say to you, my time is running out. And one thing, I don't just want to say, one thing I want to shout. I want to shout I love you, I want the whole world to know., but I want you to know this more, then anything I've ever told. I want you to realise, that I am what you see, the person I saw in the mirrors for years, wasn't the true me. But there are things I want to say to you, and I'm afraid you'll laugh. But maybe you won't, and that'll make all the difference, because I'll feel better if you don't. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Just anotther little stupid poem. Have a nice day everyone!  :-) Ps. still wanting to change my signature, any more suggestions??? Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here........it's sad that you can't talk to him and express yourself openly.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, communication is a good thing. I liked the poem, good job of writing it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks you guys!!!!!!!!! You already know you're the best!!!!!!!!!!!!      well, g2g go home now, so see yas tommorow. Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
that was really sweet..... I bet Justin feels the same way  me personally, i'd make sure i don't call i'll make sure that we were together till the end I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great poem, as usual! Signature ideas? Don't got one. Sorry. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks acire and Allan! ya all are way cool!!!!  I am just so loving these smilies!!!!!!! Anyways, c-yas! Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
That wasn't a stupid poem at all.. that was great! Very sweet... *Jennifer |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
amazing. it was not even close to stupid far from it. Regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I don't think it was stupid! You have just expressed something I've been feeling for a LONG time about someone, in a way I never could. Great job!! And keep writing too, you have so much talent!! Much Luv, ~*~S*W*E*E*T*S*T*U*F*F~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
this was good~keep writing *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
wow. you know what, it's the words that aren't said that are the ones that hurt the most in the end; mostly because you both walk away with regrets. You, wishing you would have and he wishing you would have too. anyways, communication is a great thing and has power. Best wishes ~*~Jessica~*~ "Tell me why you cry" [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
hey, Very good poem I liked it kinda sad that he does not say anything but you know as my friend says "guys are jerks. present compaine excluded" then *that innocent little smile she does* keep up the great work. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is sooooooooooo good!!! I LOVE IT!!!! :> ANYWAY..... keep writing great stuff like this... it's awesome!!!!! ~*Valerie*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Wheelsgirl Junior Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 21MA, USA |
I liked it a lot... Keep it up! If ever u wanna chat email me [email protected] |
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